This we week we are gonna try another elevator pitch! Below is the video.
This time I tried to be more enthusiastic and introduce who I am before beginning my rant on my business idea. I think it made it better but let me know. Until next week my friends.
Hi Travis! I think your idea is great! A lot of my friends are obsessed about the watches they have and I know that they would really like to be able to wear a large variety of watches. I think you have a great service that has potential in the real world. Your elevator pitch was good. I would have included the price in the pitch so that a person can know if it is a good fit for him or her. Check out my elevator pitch here: http://www.floridagirlss.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteHey, Travis. As the years go on watches are not worn as much because people usually check their phones for the time but people who are older like to wear watches to check the time and for fashion. I, too, like to only wear a specific silver watch so I would never use this service of yours but others who don't own watches could use this. We're both providing a service to others but yours is more tailored to the individual rather than the group, which is great because it can tend to the needs of someone more closely. Your pitch was alright because it was felt like you were answering questions without asking them and that's a plus. If you would like to see my blog post, here's the link: http://thisisnotawkward.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteHey Travis,
ReplyDeleteI think the biggest thing that stands out is your enthusiasm during your pitch. Most of the videos I've watched so far have practically been make out of cardboard. I like your concept, and believe there may be a market for such a service, although the difficult part will be in administrating something like this. If you'd like to check out my elevator pitch: http://bmwtechnician.blogspot.com/2016/02/enc3003-elevator-pitch-2.html